It is the story of a young man who is not liking where his life ahs taken him. Living in Saginaw, Michigan he works in a transmission factory for his wealthy best freind. This excerpt has our protagonist, Simon, robbing a liquor store and hitch hiking to Pittsburgh to be with his girlfriend. He has plans of heading to New York and making it big as a musician.
On Wednesday morning
Simon was having trouble sleeping. He went for a walk. At three in the
morning the roads of Saginaw were quiet. Dead. The streets rolled up
and it seemed everyone was asleep. He turned onto State Street. A car
drove by and Simon turned up his collar to the cold and the damp. His
shoulders were raised up to his ears in an attempt to stay warm. He
did not really know why he was out walking at such an hour, but he
was. He thought he should turn around and go home but something kept
pushing him to walk. He passed shop displays and store windows with
“help wanted” signs leaning in them. In the distance he saw a
light coming onto the street. It was the liquor store that he had
gone in a few times as an under aged teenager trying to get alcohol.
Every once in a while the attendant would give it to him but
sometimes he would refuse.
“Simon,” the man
behind the counter would say, “When you are old enough I will buy
you a drink, but not a day sooner.”
He stood outside the
liquor store, the neon lights that split through the cold night air
gave off an electric hum the disturbed the silence of the cold wet
street. The buzzing went into Simon's head that gnawed at his brain.
He opened the door and entered the store. The man behind the counter
looked up from a paper back novel, he turned the volume knob down on a radio that rested on a
wooden stool next to the cash register. It was not the usual man in
the store. Simon felt relieved that it was not Jeff; he still walked
around the store to get his nerves up. Simon walked to the back of
the store. He made it look like he was looking for something, he
picked up a bottle while still looking at the front of the store. He
glanced down at it and saw that it was a bottle of vodka. The clear
liquid quietly splashed in the clear bottle. Quickly, he put it down
and rushed up to the front counter.
With his hand in his
coat pocket he held it up past the counter top to resemble a gun.
“open your cash and give me your money!” He shouted.
The man almost fell
off his chair as he stood up. “What?” he was discombobulated by
the shock of being disturbed.
“Give me your
money jerk, or I'll shoot!” He felt like he was in a stupid movie
written by a desperate script writer from Tulsa. Simon did not want
to hurt anybody, hell he did not even want to rob the store but here
he was robbing a liquor store.
To his amazement he
heard the cash draw open and there was a bunch of money on the
counter. “Take it and get out before I call the cops.” The man
behind the counter said. Simon wondered if he had read the same
stupid script.
He reached out with
his free hand and put the money into his pocket. He backed out of the
store and ran down the street towards his house. He ran past dark
sleeping houses and quiet cars parked for the night. Simon thought
running at this hour was more suspicious than walking. This hour
there must be a curfew but there were no cars on the road. He turned
the corner and started running again. His house was close and as he
ran up the walk, lights of a car turned onto the street. With the
door closed behind him he peeked through the curtain onto the road.
The car drove by and slowed down to go around the bend and went into
the dark of the night. Simon sank down on to the floor and sighed
holding his head in his hands.
”I've gotta get
out of here.” He said to himself. Standing up and turning to walk
up the stairs he decided to go visit his girlfriend and from there he
would see where the world takes him. |He packed up some clothes in a
small duffel bag, strapped his guitar to his back and headed out to
the main road once again.
At this hour he figured there would not be many drivers on the road
heading south so he just started walking. The quiet was refreshing to
his ears. Normally, during the day he had the drone of all the
machines running in his ears. It took several hours of resting to get
the ringing out of his ears. Watching the evening news with Walter
Cronkite drowned out the pitch until it faded away completely. But
early in the morning he was thankful that the ringing wasn't an
issue. He turned his collar up to the cold and damp when his eyes
were flashed by the lights of on coming traffic. Trucks coming up to
the factories to get the parts to take them back down to Flint and
Detroit. That would be his best bet for a ride all the way down. From
there he would have to be patient to get a ride to Pittsburgh and to
Kathy.
A truck soon stopped
and and Simon climbed in. “Where you headed?” The man behind the
wheel asked.
“Down to
Pittsburgh.” Simon answered as he turned around to put his guitar
and duffel bag in the compartment behind the seats. “But for now
I'll take anywhere south of here.”
“I'm heading to
Detroit. The GM factory there. We'll be there by mid morning so you
just sit back and relax and let Ole' Stanley do the drivin'”. The
driver said. He was in his forties, Simon thought. He wore a baseball
cap, a flannel shirt and permanent stubble on his chin. Simon enjoyed
the silence that followed. Then after twenty minutes he fell asleep.
The blaring noise of
the truck woke Simon up with a start. Stanley was yelling obscenities
at the construction and traffic that was ahead of him. “I knew it
was coming but I didn't know there would be so many idiots on the
highway.” He grabbed his CB and contacted truckers up ahead. He
asked them how long the traffic was stuck for and if the alternates
were any better. “Morning Sunshine. Sleep well?” He asked.
“Yeah, guess I
did.” Simon answered. “Where are we?”
“We're just
outside Flint. Do you know Flint, Kid?” Stanley asked.
“Yeah, Kinda.”
“Well, we are just
about near Springfield. If we can get past the construction. These
early morning workers are a pain. If they weren't on the road I could
sail through this.” He grumbled.
“Aren't you an
early morning worker?” Simon asked.
“Yeah, kid your
right. But I'm bigger than they are.” Having said that he pulled on
the cord that let out a loud honk.
Simon and Stanley
made there way through the traffic and the streets of Detroit towards
Warren where the transmissions were needed at the General Motors
plant on Mound Street. Simon thought that he should get off earlier
so that he could get someone heading further south to Toledo or
somewhere but Stanley said he might find someone, another trucker,
heading down that way. He called ahead and sure enough there was a
trucker taking a bunch of new cars to a sales floor in Toledo.
Simon thought that
getting to see Kathy would be quicker than expected. At the plant
Simon waited outside the gates for the other hauler to come out. It
turned four o'clock and he still waited. He needed to eat and go to
the toilet but was afraid of missing his ride to Toledo. He was also
getting stiff and cold waiting around. Simon decided to walk down
Mound Street towards Detroit. Hitching as he went. He passed Eight
Mile east and then Seven Mile east he knew he must be heading in the
right direction but night was coming in and it did not look like the
type of area that you wanted to be out after dark in. At Davidson he
saw signs posted of highway 75 so he followed until he reached the
highway that would be a more direct route to Toledo.
He got picked up a
group of young men about his age and they put his bag and guitar in
the trunk and headed to the Lincoln Park area in the south side of
Detroit. As he got out and thanked them for the ride they sped off
with his guitar and bag still in the back of the car. Simon could
hear the laughter of the boys as they drove off. Simon chased after
them but the car was just too fast for his feet. “This might take
longer than I thought.” Simon said to himself. He still had the
money in his pocket and so he started walking again. He followed a
road that led him to a youth center. He felt he might be too old for
it but thought that it would be a good place to stay for the night or
they might be able to direct him to a cheap place. He was in luck,
the superintendent of the center was at the front door cleaning up
for the night.
“Excuse me, Sir?
Is there a place available in the centre for the night? I have been
coming all the way from Saginaw and I am getting tired.” Simon
said.
“Why sure there
is, son.” The large black man said. He was greying around the
temples and wore glasses that slipped on his nose. “ We always
welcome people here. It don't matter if youse black or white, yeller
or even green from Mars, if there is a bed then youse can stay.”
Simon gave a small
laugh at the accent he wasn't used to it but the man seemed friendly
enough.
“Can you pay or do
you need to do chores around to help out out.” The man said as he
walked behind the counter and switched on a light.
“Um,” Simon
stuttered. “I think I will need to do some chores. I had my bag and
guitar stolen from me so I don't have much left on me.”
“I thought youse
were travellin' light for a hitcher. I was expectin' at least a
duffel bag. Sorry ta hear that son.”